Addicted. . .
To be perfectly honest, I'm in love with this animation. The drawings and the timing and everything about this just makes me happy. I love it! :] Can't wait to see more works like this. :]
The concept is really great! :]
It's simple, but challenging. Great combination, my only complaint is that some part of the platforms are not completely solid, so it makes it easy to fall off or jump through chunks of the terrain. If it is at all possible, you should make sure that all spaces that show black that the player should be able to walk on are completely solid.
Great Job Overall. :]
The colors and the composition give the piece a sense of life, flow and vitality with a bit of grungy glitchiness. I loooove it. :]
This isn't bad, by any means, but I don't think it's terribly amazing.
It looks like you put almost no effort into her head, face, and hair. And, as rude as this is going to sound, it almost looks like you traced the body off a photo and then coloured it and added in your own head, it doesn't flow nicely, even the position of the neck seems off. I'm sorry if this sound really rude, but that is what it seems like to me.
Also . . . How is her tiny shirt staying on? there are no straps on the sides, so there is no way it would just fit and stay perfectly like that. Her top in and of itself is oddly shapoed and conforms perfectly to the shap of her breasts.
I think you should work a little more on making sure things flow nicel and work together., by the way, the background is very nice.
Your work is gorgeous. :] My only qualm is that the shape of the head makes the character look more chow than wolf, however, it's a wonderful piece.
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